Nellis Noble Magic Academy

Greetings potential readers, I would like to present my first game Nellis Noble Magical Academy. Where you play as a new student at Nellis Noble Academy, a secret magic school that teaches its students with the goal of integrating them with the majority of non-magical human society in the hopes of developing a relationship of goodwill. If the mention of superhumans feels out of place, don’t worry, that will come into play later.

Currently, I have the first chapter and the beginning of the second chapter written. I would like to receive the whole gambit of feedback. Any errors you come across, inconsistencies, coding errors, narrative awkwardness, and generally what you’re interested in regarding the setting and characters.

RO’s: Alexander Vega; A young man who possesses an intense love for knowledge as well as for sharing it. He is excited to begin learning magic, especially the arcane.

Eliza Buren; A young woman who has a passion for everything mechanical, hoping to wield Tech Magic to build what will be considered the most advanced technology of the current century.

Hussein Benglish; A young hard working man, grateful to have been accepted into the Academy so that he can forge a fruitful life for himself.

Ramona Thalius; A young woman with a great love for art and life, including everything that exists a little past conventional life who wishes to find someone who shares that fascination.

Ilsa Vanarie; A second-year student who enjoys using her magic for mischief and using her charm to present a good first impression.